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Second Version

This is the second test run for my final project.

The grand entrance in the first photograph works well as an introduction for the story, however, the second photograph lacks the romanticism that should contrast with the first photograph, I will test some of the photos from The Parcel Yard in its place.

The colours in the photograph of Speedy's works well in this sequence, but it is not at the best angle. The photograph of the London Eye contrasts nicely with the last photograph, but perhaps to better balance the sequence it should go earlier on in the narrative.

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Avigail Goodman

'My thoughts tend to sound better in books I didn't write, and in the songs I didn't sing. Even then, sometimes there is no piece of literature, no song, no work of art that can really explain the...