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First Version

This is my first attempt at a version of my final project.

I'm not sure if the first photograph is a grand enough entrance for the sequence, and the fifth photograph seems slightly out of place, and creates a dull sense overall.

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  • This photo creates an immediately dull sense in comparison to the other photos.
  • This blends in too much with the previous photograph.
  • The colours here seem out of place in this sequence.
  • First Version
  • This seems out of place with the other photos in terms of editing.
  • First Version

About the creator

Avigail Goodman

'My thoughts tend to sound better in books I didn't write, and in the songs I didn't sing. Even then, sometimes there is no piece of literature, no song, no work of art that can really explain the...